Thursday, February 4, 2010

blog 2!

A normal work day at green elementary with any teacher would most likely consist of sitting and reading out of books, but walk into Mrs. Dreyfuss’s room and they are moving and working at the same time. Trying to keep the kids blood flowing, keeps them more focused and on task. Looking at Mrs. Dreyfuss you would assume she s an ordinary 2nd grade teacher but go deeper and you realize she has had many battles in life, starting with breast cancer. Fully recovered now she enjoys teaching her 2nd grade class and sometimes participating in the Susan G. Colman 3 day walk with her dog in training. Mrs. Dreyfuss is a short blonde haired, spunky woman and enjoys dressing in style. She speaks her mind when needed and is able to control her class. Mrs. Dreyfuss has been teaching for 33 years, and in that time she has contributed to green faithfully.


is there anything i can add to give more detail about her life?
anything to add to make it better?
anything you want to know about her?



1 comment:

  1. "but walk into Mrs. Dreyfuss’s room and they are moving and working at the same time."

    Who are?

    More description. Your relationship. Your interview process (where was it, when was it...)

    Various grammar errors, have someone edit tomorrow.

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