http://benno.newsvine.com/_news/2009/06/20/2951007-water-wars-2009-privatization-industrialization-pollution-exploitation-conflict
1. The basic issue is that industrialization leads to increased water consumption by everyone and everything. 70% of or water is taken by industrialized agriculture and agriculture is always being industrialized.
2. it does not tell you where the other 30% is going. it could be for humans to consum it, or using it else where.
3. if i were to create a follow up, i would deffenetly add the information that is missing. i would try to add more into the story to make it relate to people on a more personal scale.